Immersinon assembly recount

Immersion Assembly Recount

WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.

PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the key words to your plan.  Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.

Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?

Who?  Pt england kids, teachers at pt england school. What? It was  Immersion assembly to watch Where? At pt england school. When? Term 2 of school

BODY: Describe what happened.

Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)

School Theme for Term 2: Team 1: tools to move thing away. Team 2: sport and ways to see when the ball will land so it land in the hoop. Team 3 : they were moving the part of their body. Team 5: they are using shapes to their learning. How did each of these teams share their inquiry topic?

Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences)

Team 4 Inquiry Topic: How did the Team 4 teachers share this? We are learning flight.

Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences)

Write about your favourite item from assembly. Term 3 there use their body to dance.

Conclusion (Summary)

What do you want to/hope to learn about? I want to learn push thing are big with tools. What do you think about the new term theme overall? It was fun. Is this different to how you felt before the assembly? I felt scared when i walk in the assembly.

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:

Pt england kids teachers at pt england school. It was immersion assembly

It was at pt england school.  

Today was term 2 at pt england school today..

term 1 use thing are big to push so there use tools to push the thing that is big away.

Term 2 Sport and ways to see when the ball will land in the hoop.

Term 3 were using their body of dance as exercise of their body on the movie.

Term 5 is was using shapes to their learning term 4 is about things can flight like a kite. My favourite was term 3 because they use there body of dancing and it exercise.

I want to learn push thing are big with tools  and all the terms movie was cool and It was fun watching it. I felt scared when i walk in the assembly because i was late.

 

I know I have been successful writing because my recount:
1	Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.
2	Recounts the experience in paragraphs in the order the events happened.
3	Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.
4	Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).
5	Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.

Finished?

1. Get feedback from a buddy.
2. Create a drawing/image or add a photo.
3. Share your writing and image on your blog:

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4. Add the link to your blog to our class Blog Log.