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Thursday, 14 June 2018

Matariki recount





On Friday it was matariki day, on the 8th of June so what we did is we split into groups so I was in the cooking group but were I have to meet my group was at the hall.


My teachers was Miss Vaafusuaga, Mr Moran, Mrs Wiseman and lucky tyson Vaafusuaga told us the Instructions so first thing that we did keo rahi i Did not know how to play so I watch the prefix doing the game, so i know how to play the game but we had Different group’s. So as we play the game we had a break from doing our game that we had play before so after that it was morning tea. And we went to the hall to get our lunch to eat when it was morning tea. The bell ring so we have to go to the hall so what we were doing is cooking so what we cook was rice bubble cupcake so here what you need is to have butter sugar rice bubble and some honey then next is you mix then i put some Sprinkles then I eat it and i think of it was to much of honey. And now was our final game it was dodgeball game so that was our last game so we played it so there was a two team so it green team and yellow team so we start the team and what we have to do is if one of my team got the ball we have have to give the ball to the person that’s is standing on the dot so you have to pass it to them and they move to another dot. So after it was finished the green won the game but now we have to go in the hall to talk about something, so all of us went in the hall and we sat on the ground like we do on the normal friday’s Mr Burt said you have To remember the special people you love. Then we look all the pt england kids looking at there work that there have done so they go on the stage and show it to everyone. Soon it was finished but there was 2 or 3 more it was movies my favorite movie was Thunder movie, and now it was finished we get to go home and have a good day.






so today we done is we are working on our matariki on Friday and talking about what happen on matariki day hope you guys injoy.



Wednesday, 6 June 2018

Narrative

Writing - Narrative Week 6 Term 2 2018
   
First name
Victoria
Last name
Samasoni
Year
5
Room
Ako 3
Teacher   
Miss Moala


Water Bucket




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Send these animals off on an adventure together. Where are they going? How are they going to get there? How will they know where to go?


Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.


What problem is caused?
How is it solved?


Think about:
  • where your story is set
  • who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
  • the problem and how it is solved
  • the order of your ideas and how they are linked.


Remember to:
  • choose your words carefully
  • take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.


Planning Space
  1. There was a Unicorn walking around the land of Unicorn.
  2. A Unicorn a book that don’t look like the Unicorn’s book.
  3. She grab it then something shining came up and chang the weather.
  4. Then all the bad mens came out of the book but the Unicorn run because they were scared







S

tart Writing Here:


On a summer day there was a Unicorn land but there was the colorful rainbow Unicorn name diana she was, walking around the land, after looking around the land she found something it was a book but not like the Unicorn book the colors on was black and green.








she pick it up then something wrong happen, she thought that she did something to herself but she knew that she don’t did something wrong it shine up in the sky and it change the weather to lighting all the bad mens came out too to take over the Unicorn land, but the king came out his name was scar there were bad Unicorn all the good Unicorn run away because there nothing to do but diana can not think of something.





The king when inside the castle chang everything in the castle but it not like all the bad mens were just bad there was one person,Name johnson he was not bad because he was one of the good Unicorn but long time ago the king came back and force them to be his army he was hiding in the bruch’s but diana was try to think of something to stop the bad mens and scar but someone made a nose but it was johnson making the nose’s then he came out of the bruch’s then told her there is a way to break the spell but the king got it so be careful because there will be something can hurt you.





Next day she sneak inside the Unicorn castle and the book of the bad mens was in was inside the king’s room it was lock and all the windows was lock too, but just not all the window’s she clinb on the outside of the castle then she opened all the window and break the spell.

The end     








today we had to show what we can write when we have 40 minutes to wirte without talking to others we were able to work quietly to complete the task.

Monday, 28 May 2018

Choose it narrative.

Choose It Narrative




Today you will be writing a narra2 tive. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.





When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.





Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.








Image Attributions:


Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons


By Rapportere [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/)], via pxhere.


Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons


Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.












Once upon A time, on sunday A girl name rosario as she was exploring Her plan was too go up in the sky to she what it looks like. but she said to herself that she will need lots of food because if she had less food she won’t survive. But how was she was going to fly she buyed a million just balloon’s and below them up in the morning to middle of the night. She was really tired after that she blew the balloon. She stick all of it on top of the house inside the fire place, but now it was time for her to fly in the sky. But the house fly until night, it was night it was storm day it woke her up that she got scared that the storm woke her up. So she open Curtains and saw a storm. As she tried to turned around she keep going but lots of stuff was moving but something was Wrong the balloon was popping and she said oh my!! My balloon is popping then she prayed and told god this, Dear god please help me I am in danger can you please help me then god heard her but then he talk to her said I’ll will help you as long you do not get in danger so god, lift her house up with his special power and went away from the storm. When the house was away from the storm God put the house down and rosario say thank you to god and God say I am here to help everyone when they need help just pray.


So after that she was some were on the land but no one was there so she called it peace land because there was no one there so she called a peace land. But something was not peace is was a creature it was not then a normal creature it was a alien in that place that rosario was living in but here is the problem is she was not allowed but she flow but she got away.






Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:





I have:



1


Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.



2


I have had a friend read my writing to check the sentences make sense and that I have used capital letters and full stops.



3


I have had a friend read my writing to check I have used paragraphs correctly.



4


I have used descriptive vocabulary which helps to paint a picture for my audience.









Once you are finished…


Make sure your blog post includes:


JPEG of your planning


A copy of the picture you choose to write about (correctly attributed) AND a picture which you have drawn to go with your writing.


Your story from above


Add these labels to your writing. Can you think of any others you could add?


2018, Writing, Narrative, Flight, Ako 3


Copy the URL to your blog post and paste it to the blog log.

Wednesday, 23 May 2018

Tummyahce




today we are learning tummyache and this show my work what have i done. so what we are doing is we are answering the question how many lollies did each four kids get. hope you injoy.

Airaplanes.



this week we are working on our airaplanes fly. today i worked with nature tori and patience. and how dose airaplanes.

Monday, 21 May 2018

Ball Experment



On monday Mrs West and Miss Moala wanted to do an experiment.


The experiment was the ball there was a small ball and the big ball


Mrs west, Miss moala had a talk about the balls so they work as a team so Mrs West and miss moala pick who is going to take the big ball and take small ball. As they pick their ball after that they stand on the chair and they hold it at the same height. they drop it and the small pretty ball drop with the big ball on the ground. as the ball drop down to the ground the small pretty ball cracked right to the ground. But Miss Moala had to clean it up because she pick the small pretty ball.





Mrs West stode in a chair so did Miss moala and they holding a ball And they drop it at the same speed and as Miss Moala small ball cracked to the ground and as Miss Moala drop the ball it was a mess so Miss Moala clean her mess because she pick the small ball. Then after that they talk how can the small can’t bounce back up and how can the big ball bounce up.





The small ball can’t bounce with the big ball because the small ball had no air and it is lighter. Lighter means that something not heavier than a big ball.






if the small ball can bounce with the big ball at the same time.





Saturday, 19 May 2018

Patience's birthday.

Today is the 19th of may.


Today i was going to Patience birthday to say happy Birthday to Say Happy Birthday to patience as I walked in I was scared because it was my first time being in patient's house but I was walking and I saw Latisha and zyla too  as I was walking inside the house.
what we did inside was face painting my face painting as a flower with the other girls too.
then next weekend as we went inside this what patience table look like it was so cool that she had lots of lollies and her table and lots of cupcakes  on her table.
The next we did we went upstairs because patients forgot to show us the stairs the first room was patients mum dad’s room the next room was patience and her sister name and Anahere room next room was hone room and on the side is patience desk it was full of loom bands but it was an a stack on the side but as soon as we been on the stairs it was fun playing with patience play with the slime  that's I brought for her.

even though patients cousins came with us too as she opened it she was very happy with the presents that I bought for her she said to me I thank you Victoria and I said that you are so welcome. and I told her that if I could play with her slime and she said yes you can and when I play with the slime it was pokey and it was cool. but at one PM we had Kai I had cupcakes and pizza of lollies too.
But when it  strike to 3 my mum was her an i sayed to patience goodbye and patience Mum give me some lollies and gave me some loom bands witch was cool and fun.


This how it went on  patience birthday party