You've done a great job telling me what you see in the pictures, but don't be afraid to use your imagination! What do you think it sounds like, or smells like, or what it feels like to be there! I really enjoyed this, kia mau Victoria, keep up the good work!
Morena Victoria. Well done on describing these pictures you did really well. I think the only thing you should do different is try not to use and so much, other than that it turned out really good well done.
Mahi pai Victoria,
ReplyDeleteYou've done a great job telling me what you see in the pictures, but don't be afraid to use your imagination! What do you think it sounds like, or smells like, or what it feels like to be there! I really enjoyed this, kia mau Victoria, keep up the good work!
Morena Victoria.
ReplyDeleteWell done on describing these pictures you did really well.
I think the only thing you should do different is try not to use and so much, other than that it turned out really good well done.