Choose It Narrative
Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.
When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.
Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have the TOPS elements.
You will be creating a plot line after your story is complete. This may help you add more details into your story before publishing.
The Hollow land is full of darkness and shadow ness and full of mean things, and a girl name Nancy she is a princess well a bossy princess because she bosses everyone thats around her and they don’t like her but they just have to roll with it, and when everyone wouldn’t do the thing she would gruels them and say they are “PATHETIC”.
Now in a Miracle land, a beautiful queen named Amethyst, she is so kind that everybody loves her because she likes to give them food and likes to babysit kids even though she is a queen. One day she was in her room reading a book until she heard a knock on her window she went out to see who was the person who knock on her window as she got up she looked outside which gives her a view that can lead to the evil land, once she looked out she saw something odd she can see a fire in the evil land she wanted to help but she was so scared that she didn't want to go out to the evil land but she really want to help.
Evil land Nancy:
While Nancy was walking around she saw the amircle land and she thought if she could put on a trick to put them in danger because she really wants to rule the lands. But if she could tell her parents her parents wouldn’t care because they are bad like her. So she thought of a plan and it was to buy a fire to make it look like it was really bad like someone needed to put out the fire. So after that she grabbed a rock and chucked it to the window where queen Amethyst room was. She threw it and it really went far. Next step she called out “HELP HELP SOMEONE SAVE ME I’M GONNA DIE” and a man came up to her and said “Are you alright??” she replied: “Shhh go away i'm trying to do something” but said it in an angry whisper.
Queen Amethyst good land:
The Hollow land is full of darkness and shadow ness and full of mean things, and a girl name Nancy she is a princess well a bossy princess because she bosses everyone thats around her and they don’t like her but they just have to roll with it, and when everyone wouldn’t do the thing she would gruels them and say they are “PATHETIC”.
Now in a Miracle land, a beautiful queen named Amethyst, she is so kind that everybody loves her because she likes to give them food and likes to babysit kids even though she is a queen. One day she was in her room reading a book until she heard a knock on her window she went out to see who was the person who knock on her window as she got up she looked outside which gives her a view that can lead to the evil land, once she looked out she saw something odd she can see a fire in the evil land she wanted to help but she was so scared that she didn't want to go out to the evil land but she really want to help.
Evil land Nancy:
While Nancy was walking around she saw the amircle land and she thought if she could put on a trick to put them in danger because she really wants to rule the lands. But if she could tell her parents her parents wouldn’t care because they are bad like her. So she thought of a plan and it was to buy a fire to make it look like it was really bad like someone needed to put out the fire. So after that she grabbed a rock and chucked it to the window where queen Amethyst room was. She threw it and it really went far. Next step she called out “HELP HELP SOMEONE SAVE ME I’M GONNA DIE” and a man came up to her and said “Are you alright??” she replied: “Shhh go away i'm trying to do something” but said it in an angry whisper.
Queen Amethyst good land:
As she thought about it twice she finally decided and went out of her place and went to the forest but as she was once step away from going inside the forest she hair at the back of her neck went up, she felt like a bad spirit was around her she had shivers down her spine but still went into the forest and she kept hearing she said to herself “it ok keep on going you might be scared but you have to face your fears..” she was really scared but she wanted to be confident after that she heard another voice saying “HELP HELP SOMEONE SAVE ME!” Amethyst raced all the way following the voice and then she stopped. She can feel like someone keeps on following her apparently someone went behind her and tackled her and she passed out.
Evil Land Nancy:
She was following Amethyst the whole time then she had tackled her then she pulled her to the evil land and Nancy dragged her to her room and said “Ha Ha now I got you all I need to do is to put you somewhere where nobody knows!” but instead she just chucked her into the closet then once she had done that she had gone out to the Miracle land and pretended that the queen had died. Once she got there she could tell that the queen’s people didn’t seem happy with Nancy coming to their place the queen’s people said “Why Are You Here!?” Then Nancy said “Your queen has died!! Now since she has died you are gonna bow down to me!” the people were so mad and sad at the same time that the cloud became thunder lighting, Nancy said she will give them three days to decide for them to go or to let Nancy become their queen.
Evil Land Nancy:
She was following Amethyst the whole time then she had tackled her then she pulled her to the evil land and Nancy dragged her to her room and said “Ha Ha now I got you all I need to do is to put you somewhere where nobody knows!” but instead she just chucked her into the closet then once she had done that she had gone out to the Miracle land and pretended that the queen had died. Once she got there she could tell that the queen’s people didn’t seem happy with Nancy coming to their place the queen’s people said “Why Are You Here!?” Then Nancy said “Your queen has died!! Now since she has died you are gonna bow down to me!” the people were so mad and sad at the same time that the cloud became thunder lighting, Nancy said she will give them three days to decide for them to go or to let Nancy become their queen.
Queen Amethyst good land:
So now it has been 3 hours since queen Amethyst has passed out and she has finally woken up. She was thinking where is she now? Then she looked around and she felt she couldn’t breath now she tried and open the door and it opened and she went out she saw the bedroom full of horns and she felt some bad spirits around and she knows that not her bedroom and the look of the room, when she looked outside she saw her kingdom and she said “WHERE I’M I?? Oh no, what has she done??” she remembers being in the forest and getting hit but she tries to remember the name “ what her name is nacry? No carly? No oh yes I know Nancy!” she raced out and she saw some guards standing out. She quickly went out of the palace and ran to the forest and she saw her kingdom. Looking out and saw the clouds that it was dark grey and lighting she knew something was wrong so she dressed up but wore some people's clothes and went to her close friend Samantha, Samantha said “Wait is this really you Amethyst?” “ Well yeah of course it me Amethyst why is everybody sad?” Samantha: “well everybody is sad because the evil Nancy said you had died” Amethyst: “what! I need to go and tell everybody that i’m still alive!” Samantha: “ok but we need a plan first” so they planned out what they are gonna do then the next thing Amethyst went into the palace finding Nancy sitting in the chair so she went up to Nancy and said “ why did you tell everyone that I died?” Nancy: “because I want to rule the world and control anyone.” well you rule your own land but you don’t rule us...”
So they kept on arguing until it became a fight and then Nancy and Amethyst got tired but still fought until Nancy gave up because more people were coming to help the queen then after that queen Amethyst got her kingdom back and they reunited together.
So now it has been 3 hours since queen Amethyst has passed out and she has finally woken up. She was thinking where is she now? Then she looked around and she felt she couldn’t breath now she tried and open the door and it opened and she went out she saw the bedroom full of horns and she felt some bad spirits around and she knows that not her bedroom and the look of the room, when she looked outside she saw her kingdom and she said “WHERE I’M I?? Oh no, what has she done??” she remembers being in the forest and getting hit but she tries to remember the name “ what her name is nacry? No carly? No oh yes I know Nancy!” she raced out and she saw some guards standing out. She quickly went out of the palace and ran to the forest and she saw her kingdom. Looking out and saw the clouds that it was dark grey and lighting she knew something was wrong so she dressed up but wore some people's clothes and went to her close friend Samantha, Samantha said “Wait is this really you Amethyst?” “ Well yeah of course it me Amethyst why is everybody sad?” Samantha: “well everybody is sad because the evil Nancy said you had died” Amethyst: “what! I need to go and tell everybody that i’m still alive!” Samantha: “ok but we need a plan first” so they planned out what they are gonna do then the next thing Amethyst went into the palace finding Nancy sitting in the chair so she went up to Nancy and said “ why did you tell everyone that I died?” Nancy: “because I want to rule the world and control anyone.” well you rule your own land but you don’t rule us...”
So they kept on arguing until it became a fight and then Nancy and Amethyst got tired but still fought until Nancy gave up because more people were coming to help the queen then after that queen Amethyst got her kingdom back and they reunited together.
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