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today we are trying to find out something. it is a story Miss West Mrs Moala were walking all the way to KFC  and they stopped how many left do they have?

writing plan

with an explanation of how you planned together.

Introduction A short explanation of what happened at immersion assembly and what immersion assembly was for.

What happened at immersion assembly? (2-3 sentences) → Why did we have an immersion assembly? → Pt england had two weeks then school was coming up soon, on monday we had assembly about moving your body. What is the name of our inquiry this term? →  Move ya’ body. What are you going to write about in each of your body paragraphs? (Hint: look at the questions below). →

Topic Sentence 1:

What happened in the Team 4 movie? What is the name of the inquiry this term? → move ya’ body. Based on our movie and the inquiry name, what do you think we are going to be learning about this term? → fitness moving your body and being healthy.

Topic Sentence 2:

Based on our movie and the inquiry name, what do you think some of the activities might be this term? → When you wake up it makes you to feel good and you can get use to the cold. How does the idea of these activities make you feel? Good

Topic Sentence 3:

Based on what you wrote above, what do you already know about this topic? → It about focus and and staying healthy What words do you know already about this topic? →it about fitness and sleeping at the right time

Conclusion

How do you feel about this inquiry topic? Are you excited/ nervous? Any other emotions? Do you have any learning goals you want to achieve this term while doing this inquiry? How do you think this inquiry will help you achieve these goals? no

Move ya' body

On monday it was back to school and it was assembly and were excited to she our friands and teachers after that we were waiting for the others to come.They came and sat down and we saw something on the big screen that said move ya’ body that was on the screen and that was our new koreo. What happened is Mr jackson and the others were dancing with Mr jackson, when they dance it like exercising and it is good and fitness.

Forces and flight.

today we are writing about forces and flight there are four things it is lift,drag thrust and weight. on our animations it about the forces and flight and we are talking about what we know about the forces and flight while our animations is still going and telling them about the forces and flight. 

skydiving recount

On a snowy day it was skydiving day and what happen is Victoria, Rosalina and Maria went on a adventure at skydiving we packed the stuff that we needed because it was cold on that day. We wore our nice warm jackets that we are going to wear and some other stuff that we’re are going to need.
When we made it to the skydiving place I was very high and I was on a airplane ready to jump off but I was so scared to jump off because it was my first time going skydiving. I was so Excited To jump off.





When I was ready to jump off it was scary and I felt lots of butterflies in my stomach and I can’t breathe properly, when i was on my way down something that i knew that there was a Parachute at the back i pulled it and it flies up and it start flying down slowly.
The others came down and i was waiting for them to come down and i told them how was it when they were up flying, Rosalina said ” I felt amazing and this is fun”! When i was watching maria I felt scared and don’t want to go but when I jump of I felt like a superhero” like wonder women.





Now I ask my other friend maria I told her how do you felt? Then Maria said I” like it kind of but it was scary” not for Rosalina, then Victoria say oh” it ok you get use to it” when we go to skydiving after that Maria said ok” but what something happened to me? Victoria, oh don’t worry about it I will be watching as long as you having fun.So they have fun together and that the end.

Matariki recount

On Friday it was matariki day, on the 8th of June so what we did is we split into groups so I was in the cooking group but were I have to meet my group was at the hall.


My teachers was Miss Vaafusuaga, Mr Moran, Mrs Wiseman and lucky tyson Vaafusuaga told us the Instructions so first thing that we did keo rahi i Did not know how to play so I watch the prefix doing the game, so i know how to play the game but we had Different group’s. So as we play the game we had a break from doing our game that we had play before so after that it was morning tea. And we went to the hall to get our lunch to eat when it was morning tea. The bell ring so we have to go to the hall so what we were doing is cooking so what we cook was rice bubble cupcake so here what you need is to have butter sugar rice bubble and some honey then next is you mix then i put some Sprinkles then I eat it and i think of it was to much of honey. And now was our final game it was dodgeball game so that was our last game so we played it so there was a two team so it green team and yellow team so we start the team and what we have to do is if one of my team got the ball we have have to give the ball to the person that’s is standing on the dot so you have to pass it to them and they move to another dot. So after it was finished the green won the game but now we have to go in the hall to talk about something, so all of us went in the hall and we sat on the ground like we do on the normal friday’s Mr Burt said you have To remember the special people you love. Then we look all the pt england kids looking at there work that there have done so they go on the stage and show it to everyone. Soon it was finished but there was 2 or 3 more it was movies my favorite movie was Thunder movie, and now it was finished we get to go home and have a good day.






so today we done is we are working on our matariki on Friday and talking about what happen on matariki day hope you guys injoy.

Narrative

Writing - Narrative Week 6 Term 2 2018

   

First name	Victoria
Last name	Samasoni
Year	5
Room	Ako 3
Teacher	Miss Moala

Water Bucket

Click the picture to watch the video.

Send these animals off on an adventure together. Where are they going? How are they going to get there? How will they know where to go?

Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.

What problem is caused?

How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

Planning Space

1. There was a Unicorn walking around the land of Unicorn.
2. A Unicorn a book that don’t look like the Unicorn’s book.
3. She grab it then something shining came up and chang the weather.
4. Then all the bad mens came out of the book but the Unicorn run because they were scared

S

tart Writing Here:


On a summer day there was a Unicorn land but there was the colorful rainbow Unicorn name diana she was, walking around the land, after looking around the land she found something it was a book but not like the Unicorn book the colors on was black and green.








she pick it up then something wrong happen, she thought that she did something to herself but she knew that she don’t did something wrong it shine up in the sky and it change the weather to lighting all the bad mens came out too to take over the Unicorn land, but the king came out his name was scar there were bad Unicorn all the good Unicorn run away because there nothing to do but diana can not think of something.





The king when inside the castle chang everything in the castle but it not like all the bad mens were just bad there was one person,Name johnson he was not bad because he was one of the good Unicorn but long time ago the king came back and force them to be his army he was hiding in the bruch’s but diana was try to think of something to stop the bad mens and scar but someone made a nose but it was johnson making the nose’s then he came out of the bruch’s then told her there is a way to break the spell but the king got it so be careful because there will be something can hurt you.





Next day she sneak inside the Unicorn castle and the book of the bad mens was in was inside the king’s room it was lock and all the windows was lock too, but just not all the window’s she clinb on the outside of the castle then she opened all the window and break the spell.

The end     

today we had to show what we can write when we have 40 minutes to wirte without talking to others we were able to work quietly to complete the task.