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Monday 28 May 2018

Choose it narrative.

Choose It Narrative




Today you will be writing a narra2 tive. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.





When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.





Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.








Image Attributions:


Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons


By Rapportere [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/)], via pxhere.


Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons


Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.












Once upon A time, on sunday A girl name rosario as she was exploring Her plan was too go up in the sky to she what it looks like. but she said to herself that she will need lots of food because if she had less food she won’t survive. But how was she was going to fly she buyed a million just balloon’s and below them up in the morning to middle of the night. She was really tired after that she blew the balloon. She stick all of it on top of the house inside the fire place, but now it was time for her to fly in the sky. But the house fly until night, it was night it was storm day it woke her up that she got scared that the storm woke her up. So she open Curtains and saw a storm. As she tried to turned around she keep going but lots of stuff was moving but something was Wrong the balloon was popping and she said oh my!! My balloon is popping then she prayed and told god this, Dear god please help me I am in danger can you please help me then god heard her but then he talk to her said I’ll will help you as long you do not get in danger so god, lift her house up with his special power and went away from the storm. When the house was away from the storm God put the house down and rosario say thank you to god and God say I am here to help everyone when they need help just pray.


So after that she was some were on the land but no one was there so she called it peace land because there was no one there so she called a peace land. But something was not peace is was a creature it was not then a normal creature it was a alien in that place that rosario was living in but here is the problem is she was not allowed but she flow but she got away.






Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:





I have:



1


Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.



2


I have had a friend read my writing to check the sentences make sense and that I have used capital letters and full stops.



3


I have had a friend read my writing to check I have used paragraphs correctly.



4


I have used descriptive vocabulary which helps to paint a picture for my audience.









Once you are finished…


Make sure your blog post includes:


JPEG of your planning


A copy of the picture you choose to write about (correctly attributed) AND a picture which you have drawn to go with your writing.


Your story from above


Add these labels to your writing. Can you think of any others you could add?


2018, Writing, Narrative, Flight, Ako 3


Copy the URL to your blog post and paste it to the blog log.

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